1:1 Deep Essay Review: Expert Written & Video Feedback—**No Live Session Required**

Looking for feedback on your current essay?

One essay. Personalized written comments. A video explaining what’s working and where to focus your revision.

Receive detailed, personalized feedback to help you see what’s working in your essay and where to focus your revision.

Purchase a one-time essay review for an essay of up to 1,500 words. Your review includes written comments and a personalized video that walks you through the feedback in clear, encouraging language.

Feedback is typically delivered within 1-4 days of payment and essay submission. If you need feedback by a specific deadline, please email jane.malone@polariswriting.com before purchasing to confirm availability.

Feedback tailored to your writing

Students and parents are welcome to share the assignment instructions and the areas they would most like reviewed. This helps me tailor the feedback to the assignment, the student’s goals, and their current writing needs.

The review may include guidance on:

• Thesis and organization

• Paragraph development

• Evidence and analysis

• Clarity and academic style

• Grammar and revision priorities

What’s included—and what’s not

Each purchase includes one review of one essay, with written comments and one personalized feedback video. Additional feedback rounds, review of a revised draft, and follow-up tutoring are not included.

Feedback and commentary guide the student’s own revision. I will not rewrite, edit, or proofread the essay for the student.

After purchasing, email your essay as a Word document or Google Doc link to jane.malone@polariswriting.com. Include your order number, assignment instructions, and any areas you would particularly like reviewed. Maximum essay length: 1,500 words.

Feedback is typically delivered within 1–4 days of payment and receipt of your essay.

If you have questions, please email support at jane.malone@polariswriting.com